From the ground up listing


#1

Hello, first time posting here, we have our own brand on Amazon. We manufacture plastic model kits. I made a video of our product and added many built photos of the model when complete. What else can we add to the listing your feedback appreciated. This has taken a good year to climb the rankings. We have done some advertising as well on the asin.


#2

Your main picture is not very appetizing at all. It should be a shot of the ship (maybe with the box in the background) with an overall pure white background. Some of your other pics should have clearer/white backgrounds as well. The video is cool although you could have shown closeups of the ship


#3

Pretty good, but like IndigoCharms said, the pictures could be better.

It would be better if you just cut out the ship so you had a solid white background. I would recommend downloading the free open source video editing tool Gimp and learning how to use the lasso tool.

I’m not a big fan of these photo staging boxes with the white or black backgrounds, they always show up and look bad.

Basic image editing skills and a smart phone can give you a really sharp looking picture with the technology available nowadays.

Overall, well done though.


#4

I’m curious about the proof of this bullet: “Best selling ship model of all time!”

Also, in the bullets you should have an age-range so people will know if their 4-year old can make it or if their 16-year old will need to go to MIT first. Just joking but some parents are really fussy about things like that. I still remember going to a game-night party with adults and kids and a man’s kids were asking if they could play, I think it was Monopoly, he told them no as it wasn’t for their age group. Kind of puzzled me as I never look at those things and my boys had been playing Monopoly since they could count - but then I never had dumb games like Candy Land/Chutes and Ladders in the house. No insult intended to those who loved those games.


#5

Thank you for the tips I will work on them.